"When you love someone,you don't give up...
Biggest lie out there. What do you do when you give up? When he gives up? Then all hope is gone. You feel alone. You are alone. You feel alienated and pushed aside,forgotten. If there was something I could wish for it would be a miracle, a dream, but it will never come true. You're all alone now,nobody to go to.
Nobody to say they love you,for they have forgotten all of our memories.
He game up.
On me.
Now there's no hope, and I can't do a thing. I'm alone. I'm weak. Nobody's willing to listen, there's nobody to trust anymore. It's all over. They weren't willing to put up a fight. We didn't make it. I grew weak, but I never gave up. You made me feel as if I am wasting time, when I know I am not.
You left me to defend myself. Alone,again, in my life.
Sadness crawls into my heart, now love is nothing. I'm too scared to ever find love again. True love only occurs once,and when it does,you just know it in your heart. But it's over. You gave up. You left me
without caring. I was hoping a miracle would happen, I thought there was hope,but no.
Will I ever find another like you in this life? Thinking about this brings medown. Nobody can ease the pain inside my heart but you. But you're not willing to.
You were all I ever wanted,love,but you left me, betrayed me.
Now I'm here. A weak,motionless,lonely figure. Standing alone,with only my shadow to follow me. Apparently they didn't care about me enough to have hope.
So goodbye.
I will never love again.
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I wrote this a few days ago,when I was sad.
But it's all good now,I'm feeling much better. ^-^ I suppose you could comment it,teehee. It's not really poetry,it's not really a story. It was just how I was feeling at that moment,and I decided to jot it down,because I spent the whole school day in computer class doing nothing. ((One of the grades was taking a big state test,so it was pretty much a free day)).  AND MR.DARKGODJAKEYBOBBYFLAY, If you're reading this, I suppose I put this on here to show you that as much of a FAIL writer I am,I still put my work on DA so everybody can see. :'3 SO YOU GO OUT THERE AND SHOW YOUR POETRY,because it's amazing. Better then Robert Frossstt. >:U |
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I was moved. ; w ;
You should write more. ^_^
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“One life is all we have and we live it as we believe in living it. But to sacrifice what you are and to live without belief, that is a fate more terrible than dying.”
-Joan of Arc
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☆ﾐ :'3 Nya~
> w > still.... I would like to see more..
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“One life is all we have and we live it as we believe in living it. But to sacrifice what you are and to live without belief, that is a fate more terrible than dying.”
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Madii writes good poetry :3
And HAI FEAR TACO!!!!
Oh, and by the way, I bet you, right now, Cris is looking at a picture of mrs.green and feeling himself up XD
omfglmaorofl X 1000
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